Written Fussefuss

"The floor was littered with glittering debris. Kirsten was kneeling and picking it up." Someone, remind me to never do anything of the kind again? There's few things as tacky as a short, explanatory sentence for setting and the next with a name and an action. It screams for sophistication, not to speak of talent. I hate it.

And I'm experiencing partial writer's block, again. I've sentences, but can't get beyond them. "And as she stands amidst the/her bubbles, does she dream?" (The italics telling me that I couldn't decide when writing, and that it needs editing. My mind works in mysterious ways.) Any ideas, someone? I've got some rubbish about high heels and red-hot knives, but it gets me nowhere.

Written Fussefuss

"The floor was littered with glittering debris. Kirsten was kneeling and picking it up." Someone, remind me to never do anything of the kind again? There's few things as tacky as a short, explanatory sentence for setting and the next with a name and an action. It screams for sophistication, not to speak of talent. I hate it.

And I'm experiencing partial writer's block, again. I've sentences, but can't get beyond them. "And as she stands amidst the/her bubbles, does she dream?" (The italics telling me that I couldn't decide when writing, and that it needs editing. My mind works in mysterious ways.) Any ideas, someone? I've got some rubbish about high heels and red-hot knives, but it gets me nowhere.